In the report Guideline for Good Indoor Air Quality in Office Premises, the Ministry of Environment (MOE) (1996), claims that improving indoor air quality could be broken down into 2 main factors: The design and construction of the ventilation systems in the building. MOE states that the materials used in Air Conditioning and Mechanical Ventilation(ACMV) should be free from any contamination, so that air supplied to the space is not polluted. MOE explains that the air duct for taking in outdoor air should be design in area where the air is least likely to be polluted. Furthermore, careful examinations will be done by professionals to ensure systems are up to standard throughout all phases of construction. The ACMV systems should be constructed in a way such that different part of the rooms should be able to isolate from each other to prevent any spread of pollutant. MOE further imply that main components of the ACMV system should be designed in an easily reached position so that the maintenance team can perform their tasks in a safe manner.
Revised: 24 Sep 2018
Hi Meng Wee,
ReplyDeleteThis is my evaluation for your summary.
I find your summary very detailed and all of the key points in the report are included inside. I could make some adjustments to my summary because it looks like I missed out a few key points.
Some things to take note would be that the summary too long - limit of 150 words. I also feel that instead of rephrasing/re-writing the whole sentence in your own words, you replaced the words and rearranged the sentence around.
I think you can try to avoid using MOE too because of today's context. MOE = Ministry of Education. There is also a few punctuation and spelling errors in your summary.. You might want to double check again.
E.g. it's -> its (Last para, 3rd line.)
Good effort! :D
Best regards,
Pin Feng